Year 9 Descriptive writing.

A paragraph from one of Mrs Hargreaves’ Year 9 girls. She has used interesting personification and alliteration.

As the uncontrollable waves were crashing everywhere destroying the beach, the water was attacking and suffocating it.  The beach had no hope.  The waves were not settling down one bit, only getting worse, minute after minute.  The beach was powerless to defend itself against the violent and vicious waves.